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I'm gonna seal your lips with a kiss goodbye.
Please, my darling, do not cry.
Our time did come, it stayed, is gone.
Try not to think this parting's wrong.

I know it hurts - a crushing blow
But I need to fly - go where I go.
We danced together for a time
But that time is ended, and so is this line.

We will not forget this recent past;
But it's not the first, and it's not the last.
A better life awaits you yet...
And as for me, I'm not dead yet.

The story's over, our time is done;
And we both know I'm not the one.
I always said you weren't him for me
No need for tears now, and no time for pleas.

We'll face new dawns when they come to us.
We'll face new suns when they rise.
We'll go through new doors when they open -
And offer us more than short smiles.

The world isn't over.  They sky didn't fall.
You haven't lost life, so you must stand tall.
Your time isn't over - it's hardly begun;
So face the world smiling and watch the new sun...
©2008-2009 *ValhallasDaughter
:iconvalhallasdaughter:

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A poem about having to say goodbye to someone you know will hurt terribly from you leaving - but you know its best for both of you.

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:icondougengirl48:
wow...im brought to tears...i just had this discussion with my now ex boy friend

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funny bunny.he named me so :heart:


people say im different~
~people say im strange.
but the reason that they say it~
~is because they're all derranged.
:iconcsnyder:
this is so sad and so endearing, i really loved this my friend
:iconvalhallasdaughter:
I'm glad you felt so... affected by it. It was a fairly emotional time in my life :)

--
...vampyyri...
I'm not asking for much. All I want is your soul...
#The-Daemon-Pride
:iconvalhallasdaughter:
I'd say I'm glad it affected you so strongly, but having endured the emotions that the poem speaks of, I have to say that glad would be far from the appropriate word. I can empathise, even sympathise... Thankyou for commenting :)

--
...vampyyri...
I'm not asking for much. All I want is your soul...
#The-Daemon-Pride
:iconcsnyder:
i can tell it was
:icondougengirl48:
your very welcome. im sure there are many out there who feel the same way.its best to jst move on, as they say. only its much easier said than done,of course

--
funny bunny.he named me so :heart:


people say im different~
~people say im strange.
but the reason that they say it~
~is because they're all derranged.
:iconvalhallasdaughter:
of course... but time heals all wounds, so they say...

--
...vampyyri...
I'm not asking for much. All I want is your soul...
#The-Daemon-Pride
:icondougengirl48:
yeah, i have sure heardthat alot lately.just the other day i am officially together with this guy that i really like.i hope it goes well. but by judging so far i think it will:) my dadmet him and his parents ysterday, and he liked him.thats always a +

--
funny bunny.he named me so :heart:


people say im different~
~people say im strange.
but the reason that they say it~
~is because they're all derranged.
:iconvalhallasdaughter:
yeah that is good.. i hope it really works for you :D

--
...vampyyri...
I'm not asking for much. All I want is your soul...
#The-Daemon-Pride

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